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Elf

Elf

Drawing Drawing \ Figure | 05/13/05 @975 | Diane | Comments critiques (70) | Views views (6100)


Elf
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Another drawing of an elf (you can't see his big ears because of his bad drawn hair ;) )
I know the head is cut on the top of the picture, it was intentional, but now, I see that it is quite bad.... It took me approximatively 10 hours to complete it. I really prefer the first one, because I see a lot of mistakes in this one so..... find them ;) No reference used :)
2B and 5B pencils
C&C are welcome
 
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Avatar Inabottle

 05/13/05 @979

Has a val kilmer look to it I think. Fantastic details love the hair, and also the facial hair. Fantastic looks like a cover to a Romance novel. Keep it up dudet...! Your stuff is awesome
 
Avatar Diane

 05/13/05 @980

Oh thank you sooooo much!!! You're very fast to comment
 
Avatar Andy--Jones

 05/13/05 @986

Inabottle is like Quick Draw McGraw when it comes to comments :)

Really nice pencil work and the face is great. The top of his head seems a little too low but that might be the cropping that makes it look that way to me. He does look like Val Kilmer.

Nice artwork Diane
 
Avatar ohce

 05/13/05 @035

The hair look shinny.... well draw.
The face draw very well too.... very realistic...
why dont you draw a girl? I feel the hair suit a girl more...
 
Avatar JESR

 05/13/05 @093

very nice drawing i like his hair. +9/9
 
Avatar Beckett

 05/13/05 @314

Right after much looking, again I found it hard to pick something out, but I have, to me the face near the eyes seems to wide, and it makes the eyes look too close together, but that's just me... Its either that or the eyes aren't 'long' enough
 
Avatar Taintra

 05/13/05 @402

once again, well done. nice work on the hair
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 05/13/05 @406

Incredible! You are so talented Diane. I like your lighting technique. I don't know about his lips though. Something doesn't seem quite right . Maybe it's the small open area at their center. Should it be darker?

Excellent work again!
 
Avatar Dax

 05/13/05 @485

Great pencil work! Love the mouth and his eyes!
Very well done! (thumbup)
 
Avatar Diane

 05/13/05 @504

Thank you very very much everybody Thanks a lot for your critiques, I'm going to fix the problems (I will darken the small area between the lips and correct the eyes size I'll also darken this very bad background)
ohce : I'm drawing a girl for my next post ;)
 
Avatar kittyKat

 05/13/05 @573

very very nice
no crit
1O+
 
Avatar Zombihamma

 05/13/05 @723

great job kinda girly boy face very hansome
 
Avatar Diane

 05/13/05 @813

Thank you very much KittyKat and Zombihamma
I know he has kinda girly face but.... my elves are always like this ;)
 
Defractator

 05/13/05 @902

very good artwork :)
defractator - you brother... whom you asked to comment this artwork :p
 
Avatar Diane

 05/13/05 @905

Thank you dear brother :p Post your 3D stuff please ;)
 
Avatar rychelander

 05/13/05 @905

Another great work diane, I love the way you make the eyes liquid and so very deep. If that's poorly drawn hair, I'd love to see your work when you do it well...
 
Defractator

 05/13/05 @906

you're welcolme dear sister
stop bothering me with that, i'll do it :p
 
Avatar Diane

 05/13/05 @908

Thank you very much rychelander, I'm very busy because of my exams, but I'm working on a new portrait (an elf girl lol), and I'll try to draw her hair better so you'll see ;)
 
Avatar bellas

 05/13/05 @923

very soft shading technique n__n cool
 
Avatar reilanchan

 05/14/05 @445

Oh, another man with nice long hair
I like him even more than your first one.
Keep it up
 
Avatar cupcake

 05/14/05 @836

Very Good Diane!
He has the same features as Feelings.
Top Marks
Cupcake
 
Avatar Freiz

 05/15/05 @233

Wow...that's fantastic. I wish I had pretty hair like that. (tugs her hair)
 
Avatar lavodna

 05/15/05 @277

Wonderful Job! +7/7
 
Avatar eremita

 05/15/05 @422

this is just beautiful! +10/10
 
Avatar Diane

 05/15/05 @489

Thank you very very much If someone wants me to do his/her portrait with the same hair, I can do it :p (you'll appear in the drawing section ;))
 
Avatar ARTOONATOR

 05/15/05 @496

The edited version looks better, I think. And it's a funny thing Inabottle mentioned it earlier, because i also saw a Val Kilmer portrait.
One crit: maybe you should try to smoothen some parts, where you use 'islands' now. (the nose for instance, or the eye-brows)
See Grafiker's works for example. And remember; A portrait takes him 5 days or more. (thumbup)
 
Avatar Diane

 05/15/05 @501

You're right ;) I totally agree with you but.... the paper was so bad that I have done this one very very fast, and I have my exams to prepare too :)
I'll try to spend 5 days or more doing a portrait, I think it would help me to improve myself
His "Val Kilmer look" was not intentional, because I'm not a great Val Kilmer fan and I didn't use any reference, but I agree with you;) When Inabottle told me my elf looked like Val Kilmer, I have searched some Val Kilmer photos, and I have seen he was right... Hope I won't draw Schwazzenegger next time lol
 
Avatar illusiongirl

 05/15/05 @770

wowww really nice works. You really know how to make nice draw.
It's look really realist
 
Avatar BlueGothic

 05/15/05 @811

I think that the hair is actually pretty gorgeous in my opinion. Gives it that sleek and silky golden look even though it is Black and White. ^__^ I see it in colour though and it's breathtaking! Marvelous work!
 
Avatar Diane

 05/15/05 @827

Thank you very much for your comments How have you seen it in colour? I have only drawn a B&W version (it's 2B and 5B pencil lol), without reference, so it doesn't seem possible ;)
 
Avatar Xris

 05/16/05 @099

Great Diane - your pencilwork is just beautiful! The eyes are so careful and delicate.... It's all just awesome...

+10
 
Avatar Abstractor

 05/16/05 @245

Really good work Diane! beautiful detail. The mood is so intense. He just looks right through me! I love elves.
Keith
 
Avatar Sven

 05/16/05 @413

I have nothing to add! :)
Let the numbers speak for themselfs....+10 (thumbup)(thumbup)
Beautiful!
 
Avatar Furitsu

 05/16/05 @884

Great work on the eyes, Diane! :)
 
Avatar kylekatarn

 05/17/05 @548

Great work. The hair rules totally!!! Amazing pencil work there. The eyes are pretty cool, they show a lot of emotion even though his face is stoic. Cool stuff.
 
Avatar ClaraSoto

 05/17/05 @581

Ups.... I am vrey late to your drawing !!! What´s the guy phone number ? LOL, His eyes are beautiful, he is very handsome also !! Your tecnique is a Pro !! Soft lines and clean work..... just the right amount of pressure and pencil sharpness, very good !!!
 
Avatar Diane

 05/17/05 @591

Thank you very much!!!!
(to ClaraSoto : his phone number is.... hem...sorry, he told me he has no phone number, he is an elf :p )
 
Avatar viridi

 05/17/05 @663

oh yes :) 7/7
 
Avatar Cher69

 05/17/05 @798

This is awsome....I love the hair and the eyes :)
+5/5
 
Avatar Diane

 05/17/05 @803

Thank you very much viridi and Cher69
 
Avatar Xantya

 05/17/05 @957

wow..is very nice, i like the hair..

:)
 
Avatar maytree

 05/18/05 @268

i appreciate it is a little bit stylized. skilled work.
 
Avatar Danarim

 05/18/05 @767

Nice details and shading, good work. I hope we'll see something else than an elf portrait next time ;p
 
Avatar Nell

 05/18/05 @909

Really good for not to take any refference. I guess the hair could be better, I 've read you're not at all satisfied with it... maybe less highlights spread around next time. Just a comment. He is hot :p
 
Avatar hady

 05/19/05 @268

just perfect 10+
 
Avatar Maidith

 05/19/05 @547

I think this is my personal favorite work by you so far :) He's pretty!
And your pencil technique is really great.
 
Avatar Diane

 05/19/05 @846

Thank you very very very much I'm glad you like it, I thought it was bad ;)
Nell : thank you for your crit, I totally agree with you, I'll try to spend more time on the hair next time :)
Danarim : hem, my next drawing is..... an elf lol But it's the last of my elves serie ;)
 
Avatar Madilynnn

 05/20/05 @930

Wow, I love the light in this drawing - very realistic. Nice work!

- Rene
 
Avatar Madanapale

 05/21/05 @019

Beautiful work Diane....Lovely details and shadows!...well done!
Carlos
 
Avatar Jane

 05/23/05 @847

Something about the face isn't quite right, I am not sure what it is. However, the hair is actually what caught my interest in the first place! I think it is very well drawn, and the glossy look is very nice. (thumbup)
+7
 
Avatar Diane

 05/23/05 @852

Thank you Jane I agree with you for the face : the shadows on the cheeks should be darkened, it would be better. As it is now, it looks odd :)
 
Avatar soliem

 05/23/05 @872

this is a very nice elf... I LIKE IT !
 
Avatar soliem

 05/23/05 @872

 
Avatar Diane

 05/23/05 @875

Thank you soliem I love your wolf ;)
 
Avatar Medrano

 05/24/05 @145

Ho my I missed this one!!..... your really talented Diane +10
 
Avatar zilekondic

 05/25/05 @596

Hey, the pencil is great, his eyes are full of life...look like one of my friends... you get top marx
Keep on the good work, i like it very much.
 
Avatar Diane

 05/25/05 @676

Thank you very much
 
Avatar valkirye

 05/28/05 @520

Haha, he remember me the actor Val Kilmer Great shadows and composition, congratulations Diane!
 
windcup

 05/31/05 @559

great drawing skill
 
slaphapy5

 06/01/05 @732

Great job on this, I couldn't help but think Val Kilmer...

But great facial details (as always) and great lighting!

~slap
 
Avatar Angeloonie

 06/04/05 @908

Amazing job Diane, though his hair is kind of girlish
 
Avatar Diane

 06/05/05 @377

Thank you very much windcup, slap and Vince :)
 
dariomanno

 06/06/05 @561

Very nice, impressive shading skills and a lot of details. I like it a lot. Only one thing, I find the eyes to be a little to close together.
 
Avatar Nicole1725

 06/06/05 @814

ooh verry nice job on this I like the girly hair
 
Avatar Diane

 06/08/05 @802

Thank you very much :)
 
Avatar Lovelessness

 06/08/05 @937

He's so feminen and masculant at the same time, omg you made the perfect man!!
 
Avatar temnik

 06/10/05 @616

Very nice work, I like it, and I wonder if it's only pencil work... Did you used your computer little bit...? Anyway I love it!
 
Avatar Diane

 06/19/05 @715

Thanks Lovelessness :)
temnik : yes, I have used only pencils, but I've blurred the background in photoshop a little (I was too lazy to do a clean background lol) Thanks for your comment ;)
 
Avatar lolita

 02/02/06 @506

OMG he is so beautiful. I want him in real! :)
 
Avatar Excorbac

 07/09/06 @254

if he's an elf from Tolkien world, there's an historical error : they don't have beards ;) (but nothing's said about them wearing piercing). More seriously, you really improved hair drawing in more recent works of yours than this one.
 
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Full Name:
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  04/23/1985 (23)
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