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Feelings

Drawing Drawing \ Figure | 05/06/05 @967 | Diane | Comments critiques (73) | Views views (4717)


Feelings
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Hello everybody, I hope you'll like this drawing (I don't really like it... Too dark, and my scanner have eaten all the light greys.... I also hate the hair, I have to work on it :( I have tried to take a photo, but it was worse than the scanned picture)
2B and 5B pencils, no reference used (juste looking sometimes at my ex-boyfriend playing on his computer... in the end, I saw that it was really like him, but it was'nt the aim of the drawing)
It took me approximatively 5 hours to complete it.... and I had to contrast it a little bit in photoshop, because of my scanner :'(
C&C are welcome :)
 
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Avatar Inabottle

 05/06/05 @976

Welcome to GFX, very nice job witht his drawing love the texture of the clothing. The eyes look good and the hair,g reat first submission
 
Avatar Diane

 05/06/05 @980

thank you so much Inabottle :) (I would like this drawing to be better, but I'm trying to improve myself :))
 
Avatar Alterpha

 05/06/05 @986

That's a really good drawing, scanner problems or not. Welcome.
 
Avatar Diane

 05/06/05 @005

Alterpha, thanks a lot :)
 
Avatar JESR

 05/06/05 @154

i tink the hair is awesome, very nice tecnic +9/9
 
Avatar Diane

 05/06/05 @365

Thank you very much JESR :)
 
Avatar Taintra

 05/06/05 @373

this is pretty good. i actually cant find a mistake.... the hair is drawn most beautifully
 
Avatar Diane

 05/06/05 @374

Oh, thank you so much Taintra, I tought the hair was really bad, but if you say it is not, I'm really happy with it (PS : I LOOOOOVVVE your little dragon ;) )
 
Avatar Almost-Human

 05/06/05 @396

I am not an artist. So this is the opinion of someone who could not do this. But then again in life most people who view this are not artists.. so it looks fantastic to me. Well done..
 
Avatar Diane

 05/06/05 @399

Thank you verrrry much Almost-Human!!!
 
Avatar rychelander

 05/06/05 @643

Very well done, scanning problems are common. I can't wait to see more of your work.
 
Avatar Diane

 05/06/05 @648

Thanks a lot rychelander
 
Avatar thienbao

 05/06/05 @691

Well done! You thought the hair was bad? it's one of the best hair drawings i've seen so far. His hair line, on the side, could come in a bit more, but other than that, this is great!!
 
Avatar Diane

 05/06/05 @694

Thank you so much, thienbao, I'm a great fan of your drawings (especially the girl for the St Patrick's day :))

I'm really surprised by your comments, because I have found really hard to draw the hair.
 
Avatar Insanemime

 05/06/05 @771

I really like this, but for some reason the mouth is bothering me. But it may just be me and I am no expert myself. Otherwise it is perfectly awesome!
 
Avatar Diane

 05/06/05 @791

Thank you Insanemime, I agree with you about the mouth, I think the light area near the lower lip is too bright ;)
 
myguitarplaysit

 05/07/05 @129

The hair is gorgeous, and the eyes are VERY realistic. The ears seem to flop out a bit too much (I'm not sure if that's what you were going for) and his lips seem to be angled a bit weird on the right so his mouth is in an odd position. Other than that it looks really wonderful. It looks like it came from a photo. Really nice job!
 
Avatar Diane

 05/07/05 @362

thanks for your critique, myguitarplaysit Yes, the boy is supposed to be an elf, so his ears are very large :) I totally agree with you for the mouth, I hope it would be better in my future works ;) (if it came from a photo, the mouth would be in the right position ;))
 
Rela

 05/08/05 @523

I think this is a wonderful drawing :)

SUPER HAIR!!!

Cmon! this is very nice and i think your scanner is not bad :)
Great..n hum...gorgeous boyfriend you have :)
 
Avatar Diane

 05/08/05 @552

Oh, thank you soooooo much I tought it xas so bad, but if you say it is not, I'm very happy :) (and yes, my boyfriend is handsome ;) )
 
Avatar Xris

 05/08/05 @612

Wonderful, wonderful piece of work Diane! I have terrible problems scanning my work too - all my .25 lines scan out at about .60 so it all becomes dark and thick lined. We lose all the fine and delicate detailing....

But - we work with what we have - and you have a beautiful drawing here, regardless of how you know it really looks

Best wishes, Xris
+10 (easy!)
 
Avatar Danarim

 05/08/05 @613

Splendid, very good technique! Nice work on the eyes.
 
Avatar FWO

 05/08/05 @633

Wow....great work!

I love the hair! :)

My max for you! 8/8
 
Avatar Diane

 05/08/05 @640

Thank you Xris, Danarim and FWO I didn't expect that, you are so kind :)
 
Vivek

 05/08/05 @795

excellent piece Diane.....i really dont see any flaw in it...excellent work:)
 
Avatar xada

 05/08/05 @804

I think its really great. Very good. How did you draw the
hair like that? I like it a lot! :)
 
Avatar Diane

 05/08/05 @813

Thank you very much :)
I have drawn the hair by imagination (my boyfriend has short curly hair, and mine is too curly to look like that, so I didn't have any reference to draw it.... it have been really hard to do).
 
Avatar Storyteller

 05/09/05 @422

Good drawing. I like the technique and detalization. By the way, if the scanner has eaten the light greays, you can restore them using Photoshop. Anyways, the picture looks good
 
Avatar ClaraSoto

 05/10/05 @985

Welcome to GFX... I think you made a very good job in this one.... realx and enjoy what you do and enjoy sharing with us... take your time !!!!
 
Avatar headhake

 05/10/05 @357

Well...It's great...I will repeat the others have said...The hair is really really GREAT...Love the look on his eyes...

Hugo Zenha
 
Avatar eremita

 05/10/05 @357

Beautiful use of tecnique! +10/10
Wellcome to GFX!
 
Avatar Diane

 05/10/05 @360

Thank you very very much Storyteller, ClaraSoto, headhake and eremita
 
Avatar flowjoe

 05/10/05 @576

Welcome to GFX, this is brilliant, I love the shadow work and all the details, very nice, thanks for sharing. Top marks

Flowjoe
 
Avatar Diane

 05/10/05 @586

Thank you flowjoe :) PS : I love your great photos!!!!
 
Avatar SailorDidi

 05/10/05 @598

this is a nice realistic drawing !
+9
 
Avatar cupcake

 05/10/05 @658

Excellent work +10
 
Avatar Im-Trying

 05/11/05 @706

apsolutley gourgeous please post more
 
Avatar Diane

 05/11/05 @709

Thank you very much SailorDidi, cupcake and Im-Trying
 
Avatar Medrano

 05/11/05 @785

this drawing is very well done the eyes are very reallistic and the hair is great! keep up the good work....+10
 
Avatar reilanchan

 05/12/05 @984

Hello and welcome here :)
Your drawing looks very nice. ON one hand he has something very masculine but on the other hand something really soft and female - just like an elf should be.
Good work
 
Avatar Diane

 05/12/05 @993

Thank you very much Medrano and reilanchan :) You're too kind with me
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 05/12/05 @078

Excellent work, love the details!! Welcome to GFX!!
 
Avatar Diane

 05/12/05 @378

Thanks a lot ThruMyEyez
 
Avatar siffert

 05/12/05 @531

Love the eyes and the hair. Good work! (thumbup)
 
Avatar lullaby

 05/12/05 @598

Wow!Great job on the details!
I'll be looking forward to more of your work:)
 
Avatar Abstractor

 05/12/05 @601

I love this Diane! Really a beautiful work of art. welcome to gfx!! the details are amazing. the eyes are captivating. Excelent piece.
Keith
 
Avatar Diane

 05/12/05 @609

Thank you very very much siffert, lullaby and Abstractor
 
Avatar ohce

 05/12/05 @668

I like the hair... is very well done.... the face look handsome too....
very good in details... nice shading~
it's good drawing from you.
 
Avatar lavodna

 05/12/05 @838

This is amazingly beautiful! +7/7
 
Avatar Beckett

 05/12/05 @923

You told me to crit... nothing TO crit, this is amazing, a bit late, but welcome to GFX :)
 
Avatar Diane

 05/12/05 @925

Thank you very much ohce, lavodna and Beckett
Beckett : I'm sure there is something to crit in this drawing... I never have done anything perfect (it is impossible ;)) But even if you say that nothing bothers you, thanks a lot :)
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 05/13/05 @380

Wow, this is really well done Dinae. I'm sorry I took so long. I thooght it was a photo at first but the pointy ears gave it away. :) Very nice detail and lighting. The shadowing is also excellent and you've used it nicely to bring out facial features.

Excellent work!!!!
 
Avatar Andy--Jones

 05/14/05 @891

great detail in the face and lovely pencil work. I think the ear size is fine but would probably make the top a little thinner.

NIce drawing :)
 
Avatar BlueGothic

 05/15/05 @852

MAD SKILLZ!! 8o I've always been impressed by those who could wheel the pencil medium so well! Just wow! *lol* I'm absolutely in love with that hair!
 
Avatar audentia

 05/16/05 @670

Excellent, you sure know how to draw!! The details and shadowing is very well done, and the hair and clothing is WOW!! His expression is very nice too, he looks like he could be from a fairytale:) My max!:)
 
Avatar mesci

 05/16/05 @674

Very nice drawing
7/7
 
Avatar Diane

 05/16/05 @699

Thank you very much for your comments, it motivates me to work more Thanks :)
 
Avatar Maidith

 05/17/05 @778

A very handsome guy <3

your pencil technique is excellent!
+8/8
 
Avatar Matonor

 05/19/05 @916

that's so crazy great, the only thing that i see and is not perfect is his mouth or chin, it looks a bit odd, +5/5 though
 
Avatar Diane

 05/20/05 @773

Thank you very much Matonor (I agree with you ;))
 
Avatar MayYeo

 05/21/05 @120

He looks so hot and cute, just my type of guy. For not using reference is superb! You have good skill with pencils!
 
Avatar LadyHydralisk

 05/21/05 @221

For five hours this is fantastic, great job, your art training shows.
 
Avatar Jane

 05/23/05 @876

I'd say you are quite wrong! The dark shadown and background creates real depth in this! An to me it seems he is standing outdoors, with someone holding a torch near his face or something. I really like the sense of light.
+9
 
Avatar Diane

 05/23/05 @885

Thanks for your comment You're right, but I don't like the "photoshop contrast" here, the original drawing was more detailed and my scanner has eaten all the details, so I am not totally happy with this version ;)
 
dariomanno

 06/06/05 @565

Actually, this one looks very good dark the way it is. I like his expression and especially the shading. :)
 
Avatar Diane

 06/06/05 @571

Thanks a lot
 
Avatar Fantasm

 07/01/05 @521

If your scanner 'ate the details', then I can't imagine what the original looks like. I can see an awful lot of detail here; the individual hairs, the shirt ribbing, the tie string, the eyes, etc.

Extremely impressive for not using a reference. You've created a very beautiful and compelling face. I just don't understand why you hate the hair. I see nothing in it to pick at. I find the shading / highlighting to be flawless.
 
Avatar xandervlad

 07/05/05 @656

You arts are very inspiring.
the elf really looks very interested in what he's seeing and enjoying it.
You really make a good elf of your boyfriend here. He could work easily as Legolas!! +5/5
(I don't know how to put emoticons, yet, sorry)
 
Avatar Daequitas

 10/27/05 @456

it looks fine to me

again kudos 2 U

waiting for your newest piece...
 
Avatar Zlatan

 01/07/06 @577

i love pencil works.Nice job.
 
Avatar Night-Walker

 01/19/06 @074

This IS a Cool Elf dude.

If I have to fuss...lol...I would say that the beed on his head would of worked better in his lip, if it were a bit smaller.

Still...it kicks ass, great job lady!
:)
 
Avatar Anat

 07/02/06 @941

wow, great character! he has so much personality and life. so very beautiful. i'm amazed by your talent.
 
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  04/23/1985 (24)
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